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 \section{Introduction}
 
-% TODO: Para refletir
-% IMO eu acho que temos que reduzir ao máximos os ganchos com agile, uma vez que
-% a conferência é sobre FLOSS e falar muito de agile pode fazer com que o
-% revisor diga que isto não se enquadra com a conferência.
 E-government projects differ from others due to their complexity and extension
-\cite{anthopoulos2016egovernment}. They are complicated because they combine
+\cite{anthopoulos2016egovernment}. They are complex because they combine
 construction, innovation, information \& communications technologies, politics,
-and social impact. The extension, on the other hand, is related to their scope,
-target audience, organizational size, time and the corresponding resistance to
-change. Government-academia research is an alternative to conduct e-government
-projects and to meet the needs of society. This collaborative work has
-challenges, such as align goals during the project organization, pace
-synchronization between government and academia
-\cite{anthopoulos2016egovernment}, and overcome the failure trend of
-e-government projects \cite{goldfinch2007pessimism}.
+and social impact. Their extension, on the other hand, is related to their scope,
+target audience, organizational size, time, and the corresponding resistance to
+change. Government-academia collaborative projects can be considered an
+alternative to create novelty for e-government projects and to meet the needs of
+society.  This collaborative work has challenges, such as organizing the
+collaboration project, aligning goals, synchronizing the pace of between
+government and academia \cite{anthopoulos2016egovernment}, and overcoming the
+failure trend of e-government projects \cite{goldfinch2007pessimism}.
 
-% TODO: Veja se não mudei muito o sentido de forma a prejudicar
-% Eu tirei o 'increases' da segunda frase uma vez que nós não temos evidências disto
 Poor project management is one of the main reasons why e-government projects
-fail \cite{anthopoulos2016egovernment}. In Brazil, while the academia is
-researching modern techniques related to open source and software development,
-the government still using traditional methods to discipline their software
-development. When government and academia combine efforts to develop an
-e-government solution, the differences in the project management become an
-issue. Changing the development process in a large-size institution represents
+fail \cite{anthopoulos2016egovernment}. When government and academia combine
+efforts to develop an e-government solution, the differences in the project
+management become an issue. Academia commonly work on cutting edge of
+technology while government is still relying on traditional techniques.
+Changing the development process in large-size institutions represents
 an organizational disturbance which impacts on structure, culture, and
 management practices \cite{nerur2015challenges}. As a result, government and
 academia have to harmonize their view to increasing the chances of success in
 projects with tight deadlines and short budgets.
 
-% TODO: Revisar, tentei deixar mais claro a contribuição do trabalho
-% Eu tirei alguns detalhes do survey uma vez que este será detalhado mais na frente
-% Além disto, acredito que o importante é deixar a menssagem desse artigo clara
-% e direta na introdução.
-This work contribute by extracting a set of practices from open source
-ecosystems that helped to harmonize the differences between government and
-academia. We investigated a 30-month government-academia project with the
-purpose of tracing project management practices based on open source
-ecosystems. We validated the benefits by collecting data from repository
-management tools used by the project, and we surveyed project participants.
+% TODO: Projetos de sl tem x características e muitas de suas práticas tem se mostrado válidas e que  abrem precedentes para utilizar no contexto governo academia. Falar da influência do SL no projeto
+
+In this work we investigate a set of practices from a 30-month
+government-academia project that helped to harmonize the differences between
+government and academia management cultures. We trace the best practices based
+on open source ecosystems and agile methodologies. Finally, we validate their
+benefits by collecting data from the main project repository and by surveying
+the project participant points of view.
+
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