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 The Brazilian Government released in the year 2000 the Eletronic Government
 program (eGov) aiming at democratizing information access and improving the
-public provision quality of service and information. In 2003, the Brazilian
-President created a
+public provision quality of service and information. In 2003, the Federal Government created a
 committee\footnote{\url{http://www.softwarelivre.gov.br/documentos-oficiais/
 DecretoComite}} for implementation of  Free/Libre/Open Source Software
 (FLOSS\footnote{In this work, the acronym ``FLOSS'' is used as a representative
 for ``Free Software'', ``Open Source Software'' (OSS), and``Free/Open Source
-Software'' (FOSS).}) and thereafter the Chief of Staff of Brazil sent a
-circular- letter to all Ministries in which the recommendation to adopt FLOSS
+Software'' (FOSS).}) and thereafter a
+circular-letter was sent to all Ministries in which the recommendation to adopt FLOSS
 became a public
 policy\footnote{\url{http://www.softwarelivre.gov.br/documentos-oficiais/circulardoministro}}.
 In 2007, the Brazilian Public Software Portal (\textit{Portal do Software
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