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 This paper differentiates itself from others by describing a production level
-software development collaboration between public sector and academia, but
-unconstrained to any specific aspect of the agile methods or an specific
-project management methodology on the government side. The focus on this
-paper is the whole experience of conciling the agile culture of academia
-with the traditional culture of the public sector, adapting the development
-practices and project management of those involved without transforming their
-internal processes.
+software development collaboration between public sector and academia,
+analyzing differences in the development process and administrative issues of
+the two organizations, and evidencing empirical practices that harmonized the
+interactions and satisfied the development and management process of both
+sides. The focus on this paper is the whole experience of conciling the agile
+culture of academia with the traditional culture of the public sector, adapting
+the development practices and project management of those involved without
+transforming their internal processes.
 %Melhorar o que o diferencia dos demais
 
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