From 7f11fde095125a0f5fc29519386507b8a81e670b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Antonio Terceiro <terceiro@colivre.coop.br>
Date: Thu, 13 Nov 2008 12:20:00 -0300
Subject: [PATCH] ActionItem831: reviewing texts

---
 app/views/account/_signup_form.rhtml | 14 ++++++--------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/views/account/_signup_form.rhtml b/app/views/account/_signup_form.rhtml
index f4857cf..afcebe3 100644
--- a/app/views/account/_signup_form.rhtml
+++ b/app/views/account/_signup_form.rhtml
@@ -4,7 +4,6 @@
             } do |f| -%>
 
 <%= f.text_field :login,
-    :help => help=_('"Username" is a simple nickname to recognize you on this environment.'),
     :onchange => 'this.value = convToValidLogin( this.value )' %>
 <small><%= help %></small>
 
@@ -13,11 +12,11 @@
 <small><%= help %></small>
 
 <%= f.password_field :password,
-    :help => help=_('Do not use a obviously password, but try some unforgettable word.') %>
+    :help => help=_('Choose a password that you can remember easily.') %>
 <small><%= help %></small>
 
 <%= f.password_field :password_confirmation,
-    :help => help=_('We need to be sure that you wrote correctly your password.') %>
+    :help => help=_('To confirm, repeat your password.') %>
 <small><%= help %></small>
 
 <%= icaptcha_field() %>
@@ -42,11 +41,10 @@
 <% if ! defined? hidden_atention || ! hidden_atention %>
 <p/>
 <div class="atention">
-<%= _('Here you can create an account for <b>you as a person</b>.
-<p/>
-Do <b>not</b> enter a login for a group nor for an entreprise.
-With your user account, you can create <em>several</em> group or enterprise
-accounts through your person control panel.') %>
+<%= _('Dear user, welcome to the %s network. To start your participation
+in this space, fill in the fields below. After this operation, your login and
+password will be registered, allowing you to create communities and enterprises
+in this environment.') %>
 </div>
 <% end %>
 
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