[OpenSym] Updating section 3

Paulo Meireles
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-\section{Requirements}
+\section{Requirements and Related Projects}
 \label{sec:requirements}
  
 In 2013, the SPB Portal had more than 600 thousand unique visitors, generating
 more than 16 million page views with about 50 million hits. By evaluating only
 the main projects, there were more than 15 thousand downloads and 4 thousand
-messages exchanged in their forums. This data illustrates the potential of the
-SPB Portal, even with some limitations in the past.
+messages exchanged in their forums. These data illustrates the potential of the
+SPB Portal, even with several limitations in the past.
  
 By preparing the evolution project described in this paper, the Brazilian
 government promote 3 events to collect the requirements, in particular from
-society point of view: (i) an online form to collect general ideas; (ii) a
+society point of view: (i) an on-line form to collect general ideas; (ii) a
 face-to-face meeting with society in general; (iii) a workshop to review the
 SPB concepts and requirements with IT stakeholders from the Brazilian
 government and public organizations.
  
-After these 3 rounds discussing the new SPB platform, the Brazilian government listed
-about 145 requirements and developed a mind
+After these 3 rounds discussing the new SPB platform, the Brazilian government
+listed about 145 requirements and developed a mind
 model\footnote{\url{https://softwarepublico.gov.br/social/spb/gallery/mapaconceitual.png}}
 to guide the SPB portal evolution. In this scenario, the 10 most voted
 requirements are, for example:
@@ -47,9 +47,9 @@ Moreover, there were other requirements based on the experience of the IT
 stakeholders from the Brazilian government and from the Brazilian FOSS
 community (that UnB and USP were representing too in this project). The new
 platform just could work properly if there is a unique authentication to use
-the provided tools. Additionally, a unified
-interface was an important non-functional requirement to make easy the user
-experience into the new platform.
+the provided tools. Additionally, a unified interface was an important
+non-functional requirement to make easy the user experience into the new
+platform.
  
 At the first moment, we wish to release an initial version to replace the old
 SPB portal. For that, the first version must have some features such as:
1		-\section{Requirements}
	1	+\section{Requirements and Related Projects}
2	2	\label{sec:requirements}
3	3
4	4	In 2013, the SPB Portal had more than 600 thousand unique visitors, generating
5	5	more than 16 million page views with about 50 million hits. By evaluating only
6	6	the main projects, there were more than 15 thousand downloads and 4 thousand
7		-messages exchanged in their forums. This data illustrates the potential of the
8		-SPB Portal, even with some limitations in the past.
	7	+messages exchanged in their forums. These data illustrates the potential of the
	8	+SPB Portal, even with several limitations in the past.
9	9
10	10	By preparing the evolution project described in this paper, the Brazilian
11	11	government promote 3 events to collect the requirements, in particular from
12		-society point of view: (i) an online form to collect general ideas; (ii) a
	12	+society point of view: (i) an on-line form to collect general ideas; (ii) a
13	13	face-to-face meeting with society in general; (iii) a workshop to review the
14	14	SPB concepts and requirements with IT stakeholders from the Brazilian
15	15	government and public organizations.
16	16
17		-After these 3 rounds discussing the new SPB platform, the Brazilian government listed
18		-about 145 requirements and developed a mind
	17	+After these 3 rounds discussing the new SPB platform, the Brazilian government
	18	+listed about 145 requirements and developed a mind
19	19	model\footnote{\url{https://softwarepublico.gov.br/social/spb/gallery/mapaconceitual.png}}
20	20	to guide the SPB portal evolution. In this scenario, the 10 most voted
21	21	requirements are, for example:
...	...	@@ -47,9 +47,9 @@ Moreover, there were other requirements based on the experience of the IT
47	47	stakeholders from the Brazilian government and from the Brazilian FOSS
48	48	community (that UnB and USP were representing too in this project). The new
49	49	platform just could work properly if there is a unique authentication to use
50		-the provided tools. Additionally, a unified
51		-interface was an important non-functional requirement to make easy the user
52		-experience into the new platform.
	50	+the provided tools. Additionally, a unified interface was an important
	51	+non-functional requirement to make easy the user experience into the new
	52	+platform.
53	53
54	54	At the first moment, we wish to release an initial version to replace the old
55	55	SPB portal. For that, the first version must have some features such as:
...	...