[i3eSW] Review of the first benefit

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@@ -186,25 +186,26 @@ fixes were finally available to the end users.
  
 ## Benefits
  
-Research points out many advantages of CD usage in industry, such as:
+Research points out many advantages of CD usage in industry[2], such as:
 accelerated time to market, building the right product, productivity and
 efficiency improvements, reliable releases and better customer satisfaction.
 Working with the government, we noticed the following additional benefits.
  
-### Response initial mistrust
+### Responsiveness to change
  
-The direct benefit from the CD pipeline was the fast response to changes
-required by the government. That was vital for the project's renewal over the
-years. We could better manage the tension between the government and the development
-team. Every meeting with the government leader was delicate and resulted
-on many new requirements, most of them motivated by political needs. For
+Responsiveness was one of the direct benefits of adopting the CD pipeline. The
+ability to react quickly to changes requested by the government was vital for
+the renewal of the project over the years. Every meeting with the government
+leader was resulted in new requirements, most of them motivated by political
+needs. These constant changes in requirements and priorities caused discomfort
+between the government and the development team. For
 example, once it was demanded a completely layout change because another
 government leader suddenly decided to make a marketing campaign about the new
 SPB portal. They would use undelivered requirements as a means to justify the
 lack of financial support, which was already planned in the first place. We believed that if we took too
-long to attend their demands, the project would end. CD helped us move fast
-on deploying to production, even of smaller parts of the requirements. That
-way, we always had something to show on meetings, reduzindo a ansiedade em ver a versão final. For our team, made the developers more confident the
+long to attend their demands, the project would end. CD helped us keep the 
+production environment up-to-date, even with partial versions of a feature. That
+way, we always had something to show on meetings, reducing anxiety to get the platform concluded. the developers more confident the
 project would last a little longer and they would not go looking for other
 jobs.
  
@@ -224,14 +225,13 @@ Additionally, developers worked to improve the CD pipeline in
 order to speed up the process of making available, in the production environment,
 new features for the platform.
  
-
 ### Synchronicity between government and development
  
 Despite the positive impacts that the CD pipeline brought to the project, its
 implementation was not easy at first. The good performance of the CD pipeline
 depended on the synchronicity between the teams of developers and government
-analysts, so that the work of one could be initiated immediately after
-the delivery of the work by the other. Initially this concern was not
+analysts, , so that the latter is prepared to start a step as soon as the
+former concludes the previous step, and vice versa. Initially this concern was not
 contemplated in the agenda of the governmental team, which generated delays in
 the validation of the new features of the release. This situation combined with
 governmental bureaucracy (up to 3 days) to release access to the production
...	...	@@ -186,25 +186,26 @@ fixes were finally available to the end users.
186	186
187	187	## Benefits
188	188
189		-Research points out many advantages of CD usage in industry, such as:
	189	+Research points out many advantages of CD usage in industry[2], such as:
190	190	accelerated time to market, building the right product, productivity and
191	191	efficiency improvements, reliable releases and better customer satisfaction.
192	192	Working with the government, we noticed the following additional benefits.
193	193
194		-### Response initial mistrust
	194	+### Responsiveness to change
195	195
196		-The direct benefit from the CD pipeline was the fast response to changes
197		-required by the government. That was vital for the project's renewal over the
198		-years. We could better manage the tension between the government and the development
199		-team. Every meeting with the government leader was delicate and resulted
200		-on many new requirements, most of them motivated by political needs. For
	196	+Responsiveness was one of the direct benefits of adopting the CD pipeline. The
	197	+ability to react quickly to changes requested by the government was vital for
	198	+the renewal of the project over the years. Every meeting with the government
	199	+leader was resulted in new requirements, most of them motivated by political
	200	+needs. These constant changes in requirements and priorities caused discomfort
	201	+between the government and the development team. For
201	202	example, once it was demanded a completely layout change because another
202	203	government leader suddenly decided to make a marketing campaign about the new
203	204	SPB portal. They would use undelivered requirements as a means to justify the
204	205	lack of financial support, which was already planned in the first place. We believed that if we took too
205		-long to attend their demands, the project would end. CD helped us move fast
206		-on deploying to production, even of smaller parts of the requirements. That
207		-way, we always had something to show on meetings, reduzindo a ansiedade em ver a versão final. For our team, made the developers more confident the
	206	+long to attend their demands, the project would end. CD helped us keep the
	207	+production environment up-to-date, even with partial versions of a feature. That
	208	+way, we always had something to show on meetings, reducing anxiety to get the platform concluded. the developers more confident the
208	209	project would last a little longer and they would not go looking for other
209	210	jobs.
210	211
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224	225	order to speed up the process of making available, in the production environment,
225	226	new features for the platform.
226	227
227		-
228	228	### Synchronicity between government and development
229	229
230	230	Despite the positive impacts that the CD pipeline brought to the project, its
231	231	implementation was not easy at first. The good performance of the CD pipeline
232	232	depended on the synchronicity between the teams of developers and government
233		-analysts, so that the work of one could be initiated immediately after
234		-the delivery of the work by the other. Initially this concern was not
	233	+analysts, , so that the latter is prepared to start a step as soon as the
	234	+former concludes the previous step, and vice versa. Initially this concern was not
235	235	contemplated in the agenda of the governmental team, which generated delays in
236	236	the validation of the new features of the release. This situation combined with
237	237	governmental bureaucracy (up to 3 days) to release access to the production
...	...