[ieeeSW] Review overcoming mistrust

Diego Araújo
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ieeeSW/releaseEng3/IEEE_ThemeIssue_ReleaseEng_CD.md
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 ### Overcoming mistrust
  
-In the project’s first half we struggled with deploy related problems in the
+In the project's first half we struggled with deploy related problems in the
 government structure. We were in a paradoxical situation. The government
 demanded speedy deliveries but would not give access to their production
-infrastructure. Afterwards some interactions with government agents, they
+infrastructure. After some interactions with government agents, they
 created the VE as an isolated replica of the PE in their own infrastructure.
 The government agents then realised that it could be beneficial for the project
 if they granted us access to part of the structure.  We believe it is required
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293	293	### Overcoming mistrust
294	294
295		-In the project’s first half we struggled with deploy related problems in the
	295	+In the project's first half we struggled with deploy related problems in the
296	296	government structure. We were in a paradoxical situation. The government
297	297	demanded speedy deliveries but would not give access to their production
298		-infrastructure. Afterwards some interactions with government agents, they
	298	+infrastructure. After some interactions with government agents, they
299	299	created the VE as an isolated replica of the PE in their own infrastructure.
300	300	The government agents then realised that it could be beneficial for the project
301	301	if they granted us access to part of the structure. We believe it is required
...	...