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... ... @@ -15,8 +15,8 @@ SPB concepts and requirements with IT stakeholders from the Brazilian
15 15 government and public organizations.
16 16  
17 17 After these 3 rounds discussing the new SPB platform, the Brazilian government
18   -listed about 145 requirements and developed a mind
19   -model\footnote{\url{https://softwarepublico.gov.br/social/spb/gallery/mapaconceitual.png}}
  18 +listed about 145 requirements and developed a ``mind
  19 +mapping''\footnote{\url{https://softwarepublico.gov.br/social/spb/gallery/mapaconceitual.png}}
20 20 to guide the SPB portal evolution. In this scenario, the 10 most voted
21 21 requirements are, for example:
22 22  
... ... @@ -86,10 +86,10 @@ and developers obtain some information and access their source code
86 86 repositories at GitHub. However, there are not social networking and CMS
87 87 features, as well as, other communication resources provided by that platform.
88 88  
89   -Also, there are two initiatives in Europe:
  89 +Additionally, there are two initiatives in Europe:
90 90 OSOR\footnote{\url{https://joinup.ec.europa.eu/community/osor}} and
91 91 OW2\footnote{\url{http://ow2.org}}. The Open Source Observatory (OSOR) is a
92   -community hosted in the JoinUp platform powereded by the European Commission.
  92 +community hosted in the JoinUp platform powered by the European Commission.
93 93 OSOR aims exchanging information, experiences and best practices around FOSS
94 94 solutions for use in public administrations. Summarily, it helps to find a FOSS
95 95 made available by other public administrations, providing access to information
... ... @@ -110,13 +110,13 @@ quality resources and expertise on the various topics related to FOSS. The
110 110 QualiPSo project also had planned to develop a platform called QualiPSo
111 111 Factory but it was not fully completed.
112 112  
113   -In Latin American has an initiative based on the SPB project called Software
114   -Publico Regional\footnote{\url{http://softwarepublicoregionalbeta.net}}. From
  113 +In Latin American has an initiative based on the SPB project called ``Software
  114 +Publico Regional''\footnote{\url{http://softwarepublicoregionalbeta.net}}. From
115 115 the practical point of view, it provides a customized Gitlab instance to share
116 116 the source code and documentation of the project from the involved countries.
117 117 %
118   -Such as Brazil, Chile has its own portal also called Software
119   -Publico\footnote{\url{http://www.softwarepublico.gob.cl}}. The user can create
  118 +Such as Brazil, Chile has its own portal also called ``Software
  119 +Publico''\footnote{\url{http://www.softwarepublico.gob.cl}}. The user can create
120 120 content in the communities (news items, documents, wiki pages), but all
121 121 repository is available at the Bitbucket
122 122 platform\footnote{\url{https://bitbucket.org/softwarepublico}}.
... ... @@ -127,10 +127,10 @@ thousand registered users. We could not just contact these users and ask them
127 127 to register an account at Github as well. Moreover, after the Edward Snowden
128 128 case, the Brazilian government approved a specific law decree (8.135/2013) to
129 129 rule its communication service. Summarily, services like Gmail, Google Drive,
130   -Dropbox, Live, Outlook, iCloud, as well, Google Groups, Github, etc do not
131   -could be used by a Brazilian public agent as tool for your work. To use these
132   -kinds of services the Brazilian government needs to provide them to itself.
133   -Thus, we developed our own solution to cover all the requirements, producing a
134   -complete governmental integrated platform for collaborative software
135   -development.
  130 +Dropbox, Live, Outlook, iCloud, as well, Google Groups, Github, and so forth,
  131 +these tools could not be used by a Brazilian public agent as tool for your
  132 +work. To use these kinds of services the Brazilian government needs to provide
  133 +them to itself. Thus, we developed our own solution to cover all the
  134 +requirements, producing a complete governmental integrated platform for
  135 +collaborative software development.
136 136  
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