[ieeeSW] minor improvements

Paulo Meireles
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ieeeSW/releaseEng3/IEEE_ThemeIssue_ReleaseEng_CD.md
@@ -409,11 +409,12 @@ negotiations with the MP leaders. Finally, they created a VE as
 an isolated replica of PE and gave us access to it.
  
 3. _Gain the confidence of government agents._ With the replica of PE, we were
-able to run the entire pipeline and won the trust of the MP agents involved in the process. They saw the
-mobilization and responsiveness of our team to generate a new version package. They also recognized the quality of our packages and our
-deployment process. Finally, the MP agents then realized that it could be
-beneficial for the project if they granted us access to the infrastructure,
-including the PE.
+able to run the entire pipeline and won the trust of the MP agents involved in
+the process. They saw the mobilization and responsiveness of our team to
+generate a new version package. They also recognized the quality of our
+packages and our deployment process. Finally, the MP agents then realized that
+it could be beneficial for the project if they granted us access to the project
+infrastructure, both VE and PE.
  
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 Paulo: Acho que precisamos de algo ligado ao Ha-Ha-moment para fechar o texto aqui.
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409	409	an isolated replica of PE and gave us access to it.
410	410
411	411	3. _Gain the confidence of government agents._ With the replica of PE, we were
412		-able to run the entire pipeline and won the trust of the MP agents involved in the process. They saw the
413		-mobilization and responsiveness of our team to generate a new version package. They also recognized the quality of our packages and our
414		-deployment process. Finally, the MP agents then realized that it could be
415		-beneficial for the project if they granted us access to the infrastructure,
416		-including the PE.
	412	+able to run the entire pipeline and won the trust of the MP agents involved in
	413	+the process. They saw the mobilization and responsiveness of our team to
	414	+generate a new version package. They also recognized the quality of our
	415	+packages and our deployment process. Finally, the MP agents then realized that
	416	+it could be beneficial for the project if they granted us access to the project
	417	+infrastructure, both VE and PE.
417	418
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419	420	Paulo: Acho que precisamos de algo ligado ao Ha-Ha-moment para fechar o texto aqui.
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