[ieeeSW] Review CD pipeline figure description

Diego Araújo
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ieeeSW/releaseEng3/IEEE_ThemeIssue_ReleaseEng_CD.md
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 ![Deployment Pipeline](figures/pipeCD.png)
  
-The figure represents our CD pipeline: it starts with new code arriving
-which is tested and improved during as necessary as it goes through each one
-of the steps until finally reaches the production environment. At this point
-we get back to the first stage to release more new code.
+The figure represents our CD pipeline. The pipeline started when new code arrived.
+As it went through each step, it was tested and improved until it finally reached
+the production environment. At this point we got back to the first stage to release
+more new code.
  
 ### Automated tests
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102	102	![Deployment Pipeline](figures/pipeCD.png)
103	103
104		-The figure represents our CD pipeline: it starts with new code arriving
105		-which is tested and improved during as necessary as it goes through each one
106		-of the steps until finally reaches the production environment. At this point
107		-we get back to the first stage to release more new code.
	104	+The figure represents our CD pipeline. The pipeline started when new code arrived.
	105	+As it went through each step, it was tested and improved until it finally reached
	106	+the production environment. At this point we got back to the first stage to release
	107	+more new code.
108	108
109	109	### Automated tests
110	110
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