[ieeeSW] minor corrections

Paulo Meireles
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ieeeSW/releaseEng3/IEEE_ThemeIssue_ReleaseEng_CD.md
@@ -73,8 +73,8 @@ features, to provide feedback to the development team, and to report for the
 government leaders. Deployment technicians were in charge of accessing the host
 machines wherein SPB platform was running. They were, theoretically,
 responsible for deploying the project. However, the new SPB Portal was composed
-of more than ten different software projects, generating a complex deploy
-process working on seven servers.
+of more than ten different software projects, generating a complex deployment
+process, for instance, working on seven servers.
  
 To handle the interaction between these three elements, we realised we needed
 to take control over the deployment process. We used CD as a mean to fulfill
@@ -91,8 +91,8 @@ confidence and agility to comply with government requirements.
  
 In this report, we describe our CD pipeline and how it improved our delivery
 performance.  The CD made us adaptable for all requested changes and helped us
-to mitigate those aforementioned political challenges besides the technical
-issues. Among CD’s known benefits[2], we also explain those that were the most
+to mitigate those aforementioned political challenges, besides the technical
+issues. Among CD’s known benefits [2], we also explain those which were the most
 important in the project scenario for us: improving customer satisfaction and
 making reliable releases. Both kept the project alive for more two years during
 the worst political crisis after the re-democratization in Brazil.
...	...	@@ -73,8 +73,8 @@ features, to provide feedback to the development team, and to report for the
73	73	government leaders. Deployment technicians were in charge of accessing the host
74	74	machines wherein SPB platform was running. They were, theoretically,
75	75	responsible for deploying the project. However, the new SPB Portal was composed
76		-of more than ten different software projects, generating a complex deploy
77		-process working on seven servers.
	76	+of more than ten different software projects, generating a complex deployment
	77	+process, for instance, working on seven servers.
78	78
79	79	To handle the interaction between these three elements, we realised we needed
80	80	to take control over the deployment process. We used CD as a mean to fulfill
...	...	@@ -91,8 +91,8 @@ confidence and agility to comply with government requirements.
91	91
92	92	In this report, we describe our CD pipeline and how it improved our delivery
93	93	performance. The CD made us adaptable for all requested changes and helped us
94		-to mitigate those aforementioned political challenges besides the technical
95		-issues. Among CD’s known benefits[2], we also explain those that were the most
	94	+to mitigate those aforementioned political challenges, besides the technical
	95	+issues. Among CD’s known benefits [2], we also explain those which were the most
96	96	important in the project scenario for us: improving customer satisfaction and
97	97	making reliable releases. Both kept the project alive for more two years during
98	98	the worst political crisis after the re-democratization in Brazil.
...	...