Commit e987624a333bb843ebae6051a9ebccbd1c153b2f

Authored by Melissa Wen
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[i3eSW] small fix on intro

ieeeSW/releaseEng3/IEEE_ThemeIssue_ReleaseEng_CD.md
... ... @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ competitive benefits. In our experience, it was much more: it was a survival
11 11 technique. This article presents how we applied CD in a Brazilian Government
12 12 project for the development of a Collaborative Development Environment (CDE),
13 13 sharing its unconventional challenges and the strategies used to overcome them.
14   -This report from the trench of the Brazilian Federal Government can help
  14 +This report can help
15 15 practitioners to understand how important CD adoption is to their projects.
16 16  
17 17 ## Introduction and Context
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23 23 Portuguese acronym) Portal from 2014 to 2016. The SPB Portal
24 24 (www.softwarepublico.gov.br) evolved to a Collaborative Development Environment
25 25 [1] and this evolution brought important benefits not just to the Brazilian
26   -government, but also to society as a whole. For the government, the bureaucracy
27   -of using the same software across governmental agencies and the cost of
28   -developing similar software projects were all reduced. The society gained a
29   -transparent and collaborative mechanism, since anyone can check the government
  26 +government, but also to society as a whole. The government could reduce both
  27 +the bureaucracy of using the same software in government agencies and the cost
  28 +of developing similar software projects. The society gained a mechanism of
  29 +transparency and collaboration, since anyone can check the government
30 30 expenses on software and contribute to project communities. To achieve these
31 31 goals, rather than writing everything from scratch, we decided to integrate
32 32 several free software tools such as Noosfero (www.noosfero.org), Gitlab
... ... @@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ the government expectations and to provide quick response to their requests,
82 82 which were influenced most of the time by the uncertainties of the project's
83 83 continuity. We believed we would keep the project alive, even in a politically
84 84 unstable and technically complex scenario. For this reason, we focused on
85   -automating automate the deploy process; for instance, one of our senior
  85 +automating the deploy process; for instance, one of our senior
86 86 developers created a Chef-Server (www.chef.io/chef) front-end tool called Chake
87 87 (www.gitlab.com/terceiro/chake) to help us manage the multiple hosts needed for
88 88 the project. We also formed a specific team dedicated to the deployment
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