Commit 3f28d9f7338cf0e061eba41881def195d61c6954

Authored by Henry Smith
1 parent 602e2e68

Improved wording for the settings in the "My Profile" section

app/views/profiles/account.html.haml
1 1 %h3.page-title
2 2 Account settings
3 3 %p.light
4   - You can change password, username, private token here.
  4 + You can change your password, username and private token here.
5 5 - if current_user.ldap_user?
6 6 Some options are unavailable for LDAP accounts
7 7 %hr
... ... @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
20 20 %legend Password
21 21 = form_for @user, url: update_password_profile_path, method: :put do |f|
22 22 .padded
23   - %p.slead After successful password update you will be redirected to login page where you should login with new password
  23 + %p.slead After a successful password update you will be redirected to login page where you should login with your new password
24 24 -if @user.errors.any?
25 25 .alert.alert-error
26 26 %ul
... ... @@ -49,9 +49,9 @@
49 49 = form_for @user, url: reset_private_token_profile_path, method: :put do |f|
50 50 .data
51 51 %p.slead
52   - Private token used to access application resources without authentication.
  52 + Your private token is used to access application resources without authentication.
53 53 %br
54   - It can be used for atom feed or API
  54 + It can be used for atom feeds or the API.
55 55 %p.cgray
56 56 - if current_user.private_token
57 57 = text_field_tag "token", current_user.private_token, class: "input-xxlarge large_text input-xpadding"
... ... @@ -81,8 +81,8 @@
81 81 %i.icon-remove
82 82 Failed
83 83 %ul.cred
84   - %li It will change web url for personal projects.
85   - %li It will change the git path to repositories for personal projects.
  84 + %li This will change the web URL for personal projects.
  85 + %li This will change the git path to repositories for personal projects.
86 86 .controls
87 87 = f.submit 'Save username', class: "btn btn-save"
88 88  
... ...
app/views/profiles/groups/index.html.haml
... ... @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
6 6 %i.icon-plus
7 7 New Group
8 8 %p.light
9   - Members of group have access to all group projects.
  9 + Group members have access to all a group's projects
10 10 %hr
11 11 .ui-box
12 12 .title
... ...
app/views/profiles/history.html.haml
1 1 %h3.page-title
2 2 Account history
3 3 %p.light
4   - You can see all events authored by your account here
  4 + All events created by your account are listed here
5 5 %hr
6 6 .profile_history
7 7 = render @events
... ...
app/views/profiles/keys/index.html.haml
... ... @@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
3 3 .pull-right
4 4 = link_to "Add SSH Key", new_profile_key_path, class: "btn btn-new"
5 5 %p.light
6   - SSH key allows you to establish a secure connection between your computer and GitLab
  6 + SSH keys allow you to establish a secure connection between your computer and GitLab
7 7 %br
8   - Before you can add ssh key you need to
  8 + Before you can add an SSH key you need to
9 9 = link_to "generate it", help_ssh_path
10 10 %hr
11 11  
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app/views/profiles/notifications/show.html.haml
1 1 %h3.page-title
2 2 Notifications settings
3 3 %p.light
4   - Application use email specified in your profile for notifications
  4 + GitLab uses the email specified in your profile for notifications
5 5 %hr
6 6 .alert.alert-info
7 7 %p
... ... @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
11 11 %p
12 12 %i.icon-circle.cblue
13 13 %strong Participating
14   - – You will receive only notifications from related resources(ex. from assigned issue or your commit)
  14 + – You will only receive notifications from related resources (e.g. from your commits or assigned issues)
15 15 %p
16 16 %i.icon-circle.cgreen
17 17 %strong Watch
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