Non-logic wording and grammar for the new group view

Jon Bringhurst
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app/views/groups/new.html.haml
@@ -16,11 +16,11 @@
   .control-group
     .controls
       %ul
-        %li Group is kind of directory for several projects
-        %li All created groups are private
-        %li People within a group see only projects they have access to
-        %li All projects of group will be stored in a group directory
-        %li You will be able to move existing projects into group
+        %li A group is a collection of several projects
+        %li Groups are private by default
+        %li Members of a group may only view projects they have permission to access
+        %li Group project URLs are prefixed with the group namespace
+        %li Existing projects may be moved into a group
  
   .form-actions
     = f.submit 'Create group', class: "btn btn-create"
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16	16	.control-group
17	17	.controls
18	18	%ul
19		- %li Group is kind of directory for several projects
20		- %li All created groups are private
21		- %li People within a group see only projects they have access to
22		- %li All projects of group will be stored in a group directory
23		- %li You will be able to move existing projects into group
	19	+ %li A group is a collection of several projects
	20	+ %li Groups are private by default
	21	+ %li Members of a group may only view projects they have permission to access
	22	+ %li Group project URLs are prefixed with the group namespace
	23	+ %li Existing projects may be moved into a group
24	24
25	25	.form-actions
26	26	= f.submit 'Create group', class: "btn btn-create"
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