Improve sentence removing 'of' preposition

Rafael Reggiani Manzo
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ieeeSW/releaseEng3/IEEE_ThemeIssue_ReleaseEng_CD.md
@@ -45,10 +45,10 @@ members, and communicating effectively with clients (in this particular case,
 government agents). Managing the interaction of these elements was not easy and
 the unstable Brazilian political scenario only made things worse.
  
-To reaching the SPB project goals, we had to overcome strong political bias
+To reach the SPB project goals, we had to overcome strong political bias
 tied with complicated technical issues and relatively low budget. Because it is
 open to the public, the government representatives have seen the platform as a
-opportunity of marketing and have often ignored the technical advice in favor
+marketing opportunity and have often ignored the technical advice in favor
 of political decisions. Furthermore, integrating a number of distinct systems
 to work seamlessly was not an easy job. We had to learn how each system worked
 and come up with ideas of how to integrate them as fast as possible, with a
...	...	@@ -45,10 +45,10 @@ members, and communicating effectively with clients (in this particular case,
45	45	government agents). Managing the interaction of these elements was not easy and
46	46	the unstable Brazilian political scenario only made things worse.
47	47
48		-To reaching the SPB project goals, we had to overcome strong political bias
	48	+To reach the SPB project goals, we had to overcome strong political bias
49	49	tied with complicated technical issues and relatively low budget. Because it is
50	50	open to the public, the government representatives have seen the platform as a
51		-opportunity of marketing and have often ignored the technical advice in favor
	51	+marketing opportunity and have often ignored the technical advice in favor
52	52	of political decisions. Furthermore, integrating a number of distinct systems
53	53	to work seamlessly was not an easy job. We had to learn how each system worked
54	54	and come up with ideas of how to integrate them as fast as possible, with a
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