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There were some typos, mixed sentences, and nested parenthesis that were confusing.

Improve context's 2nd paragraph fluence
There were some typos, mixed sentences, and nested parenthesis that were confusing.
Rafael Reggiani Manzo
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ieeeSW/releaseEng3/IEEE_ThemeIssue_ReleaseEng_CD.md
@@ -28,15 +28,15 @@ From 2014 to 2016, our team developed the new platform for the Brazilian Public
 Software (SPB, Portuguese acronym) Portal (www.softwarepublico.gov.br) funded
 by a grant of 2,619,965.00 BRL (about 1,000,000.00 USD in January 2014) from
 the Federal Government. The SPB Portal has evolved to a CDE [1] and this
-evolution has brought important benefits not just to the Brazilian government ,
+evolution has brought important benefits not just to the Brazilian government,
 but also to society as a whole. For the government, the bureaucracy on using
 the same software across government agencies, duplicate works and costs all are
 reduced. The society gains a transparency and collaboration mechanism, since
 anyone can check the government expenses on software and contribute to the
-software communities. To achieve these goals, we have chosen to integrate more
-than free software tools (such as Gitlab (www.gitlab.com), Mailman
-(www.gnu.org/software/mailman), Noosfero (www.noosfero.org), and Colab
-(www.github.com/colab)) rather than write everything from scratch.
+software communities. To achieve these goals, rather than writing everything
+from scratch, we have chosen to integrate free software tools such as Gitlab 
+(www.gitlab.com), Mailman (www.gnu.org/software/mailman), Noosfero 
+(www.noosfero.org), and Colab (www.github.com/colab).
  
 During the entire SPB Portal evolution project, we had to handle three distinct
 issues, usual in a software engineering scenario: reaching the goals which have
...	...	@@ -28,15 +28,15 @@ From 2014 to 2016, our team developed the new platform for the Brazilian Public
28	28	Software (SPB, Portuguese acronym) Portal (www.softwarepublico.gov.br) funded
29	29	by a grant of 2,619,965.00 BRL (about 1,000,000.00 USD in January 2014) from
30	30	the Federal Government. The SPB Portal has evolved to a CDE [1] and this
31		-evolution has brought important benefits not just to the Brazilian government ,
	31	+evolution has brought important benefits not just to the Brazilian government,
32	32	but also to society as a whole. For the government, the bureaucracy on using
33	33	the same software across government agencies, duplicate works and costs all are
34	34	reduced. The society gains a transparency and collaboration mechanism, since
35	35	anyone can check the government expenses on software and contribute to the
36		-software communities. To achieve these goals, we have chosen to integrate more
37		-than free software tools (such as Gitlab (www.gitlab.com), Mailman
38		-(www.gnu.org/software/mailman), Noosfero (www.noosfero.org), and Colab
39		-(www.github.com/colab)) rather than write everything from scratch.
	36	+software communities. To achieve these goals, rather than writing everything
	37	+from scratch, we have chosen to integrate free software tools such as Gitlab
	38	+(www.gitlab.com), Mailman (www.gnu.org/software/mailman), Noosfero
	39	+(www.noosfero.org), and Colab (www.github.com/colab).
40	40
41	41	During the entire SPB Portal evolution project, we had to handle three distinct
42	42	issues, usual in a software engineering scenario: reaching the goals which have
...	...