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ieeeSW/releaseEng3/IEEE_ThemeIssue_ReleaseEng_CD.md
| @@ -28,15 +28,15 @@ From 2014 to 2016, our team developed the new platform for the Brazilian Public | @@ -28,15 +28,15 @@ From 2014 to 2016, our team developed the new platform for the Brazilian Public | ||
| 28 | Software (SPB, Portuguese acronym) Portal (www.softwarepublico.gov.br) funded | 28 | Software (SPB, Portuguese acronym) Portal (www.softwarepublico.gov.br) funded |
| 29 | by a grant of 2,619,965.00 BRL (about 1,000,000.00 USD in January 2014) from | 29 | by a grant of 2,619,965.00 BRL (about 1,000,000.00 USD in January 2014) from |
| 30 | the Federal Government. The SPB Portal has evolved to a CDE [1] and this | 30 | the Federal Government. The SPB Portal has evolved to a CDE [1] and this |
| 31 | -evolution has brought important benefits not just to the Brazilian government , | 31 | +evolution has brought important benefits not just to the Brazilian government, |
| 32 | but also to society as a whole. For the government, the bureaucracy on using | 32 | but also to society as a whole. For the government, the bureaucracy on using |
| 33 | the same software across government agencies, duplicate works and costs all are | 33 | the same software across government agencies, duplicate works and costs all are |
| 34 | reduced. The society gains a transparency and collaboration mechanism, since | 34 | reduced. The society gains a transparency and collaboration mechanism, since |
| 35 | anyone can check the government expenses on software and contribute to the | 35 | anyone can check the government expenses on software and contribute to the |
| 36 | -software communities. To achieve these goals, we have chosen to integrate more | ||
| 37 | -than free software tools (such as Gitlab (www.gitlab.com), Mailman | ||
| 38 | -(www.gnu.org/software/mailman), Noosfero (www.noosfero.org), and Colab | ||
| 39 | -(www.github.com/colab)) rather than write everything from scratch. | 36 | +software communities. To achieve these goals, rather than writing everything |
| 37 | +from scratch, we have chosen to integrate free software tools such as Gitlab | ||
| 38 | +(www.gitlab.com), Mailman (www.gnu.org/software/mailman), Noosfero | ||
| 39 | +(www.noosfero.org), and Colab (www.github.com/colab). | ||
| 40 | 40 | ||
| 41 | During the entire SPB Portal evolution project, we had to handle three distinct | 41 | During the entire SPB Portal evolution project, we had to handle three distinct |
| 42 | issues, usual in a software engineering scenario: reaching the goals which have | 42 | issues, usual in a software engineering scenario: reaching the goals which have |