[OpenSym] Reviewing conclusion

Melissa Wen
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opensym2017/content/11-conclusion.tex
@@ -24,12 +24,12 @@ to conciliate agile methodologies and FOSS practices to develop software to
 governmental organizations with functional hierarchical structures that use 
 traditional development paradigm.
  
-The SPB project represented an opportunity for us to apply many of our belief
-related to FLOSS and Agile Method. We put an enormous effort to create a
-friendly environment for everybody involved in the project, and for showing to
-the government another way to interact with FLOSS community and university. Our
-work style was extremely open and we tried to be transparent for the entire
-society. As a consequence, we believe that we still need to investigate more
-all the data produced by the project and the impacts on the students. We
-expected to conduct a post-mortem analyze in the project since we have many
-open data and we applied many concepts that still extra validation.
+In the SPB project it was employed many of our beliefs about FLOSS and Agile
+practices.  The team was engaged in creating a friendly environment for everyone
+involved in the project and in showing to government agents another way to
+interact with the FLOSS community and the university. With an open work style,
+the project has seeked to be transparent for the whole society. We belive it is
+still needed to analyze every data produced by the project and its impact on the
+students. For future work, we would conduce a \textit{post-mortem} analyse in the
+project, seeing that we have many open data to be explored and it was applied
+approachs which still need extra validation.
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24	24	governmental organizations with functional hierarchical structures that use
25	25	traditional development paradigm.
26	26
27		-The SPB project represented an opportunity for us to apply many of our belief
28		-related to FLOSS and Agile Method. We put an enormous effort to create a
29		-friendly environment for everybody involved in the project, and for showing to
30		-the government another way to interact with FLOSS community and university. Our
31		-work style was extremely open and we tried to be transparent for the entire
32		-society. As a consequence, we believe that we still need to investigate more
33		-all the data produced by the project and the impacts on the students. We
34		-expected to conduct a post-mortem analyze in the project since we have many
35		-open data and we applied many concepts that still extra validation.
	27	+In the SPB project it was employed many of our beliefs about FLOSS and Agile
	28	+practices. The team was engaged in creating a friendly environment for everyone
	29	+involved in the project and in showing to government agents another way to
	30	+interact with the FLOSS community and the university. With an open work style,
	31	+the project has seeked to be transparent for the whole society. We belive it is
	32	+still needed to analyze every data produced by the project and its impact on the
	33	+students. For future work, we would conduce a \textit{post-mortem} analyse in the
	34	+project, seeing that we have many open data to be explored and it was applied
	35	+approachs which still need extra validation.
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