[OpenSym] Reviewing conclusion

Melissa Wen
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opensym2017/content/11-conclusion.tex
@@ -24,12 +24,12 @@ to conciliate agile methodologies and FOSS practices to develop software to
 governmental organizations with functional hierarchical structures that use 
 traditional development paradigm.
-The SPB project represented an opportunity for us to apply many of our belief
-related to FLOSS and Agile Method. We put an enormous effort to create a
-friendly environment for everybody involved in the project, and for showing to
-the government another way to interact with FLOSS community and university. Our
-work style was extremely open and we tried to be transparent for the entire
-society. As a consequence, we believe that we still need to investigate more
-all the data produced by the project and the impacts on the students. We
-expected to conduct a post-mortem analyze in the project since we have many
-open data and we applied many concepts that still extra validation.
+In the SPB project it was employed many of our beliefs about FLOSS and Agile
+practices.  The team was engaged in creating a friendly environment for everyone
+involved in the project and in showing to government agents another way to
+interact with the FLOSS community and the university. With an open work style,
+the project has seeked to be transparent for the whole society. We belive it is
+still needed to analyze every data produced by the project and its impact on the
+students. For future work, we would conduce a \textit{post-mortem} analyse in the
+project, seeing that we have many open data to be explored and it was applied
+approachs which still need extra validation.
	@@ -24,12 +24,12 @@ to conciliate agile methodologies and FOSS practices to develop software to		@@ -24,12 +24,12 @@ to conciliate agile methodologies and FOSS practices to develop software to
24	governmental organizations with functional hierarchical structures that use	24	governmental organizations with functional hierarchical structures that use
25	traditional development paradigm.	25	traditional development paradigm.
26		26
27	-The SPB project represented an opportunity for us to apply many of our belief
28	-related to FLOSS and Agile Method. We put an enormous effort to create a
29	-friendly environment for everybody involved in the project, and for showing to
30	-the government another way to interact with FLOSS community and university. Our
31	-work style was extremely open and we tried to be transparent for the entire
32	-society. As a consequence, we believe that we still need to investigate more
33	-all the data produced by the project and the impacts on the students. We
34	-expected to conduct a post-mortem analyze in the project since we have many
35	-open data and we applied many concepts that still extra validation.	27	+In the SPB project it was employed many of our beliefs about FLOSS and Agile
		28	+practices. The team was engaged in creating a friendly environment for everyone
		29	+involved in the project and in showing to government agents another way to
		30	+interact with the FLOSS community and the university. With an open work style,
		31	+the project has seeked to be transparent for the whole society. We belive it is
		32	+still needed to analyze every data produced by the project and its impact on the
		33	+students. For future work, we would conduce a \textit{post-mortem} analyse in the
		34	+project, seeing that we have many open data to be explored and it was applied
		35	+approachs which still need extra validation.